You need a few upgrades, but it looks pretty close to me.
I would change:
Your shoulders, get the other BoA ones with hit
Wrist to the ones from shadowfang keep, the crit is really good and 5 more stam
Cloak to the random dungeon bandit ones, 4 more crit.
Gloves to foremans gloves, they give expertise which helps on gouge and when attacking from the front.
Legs I would get smelting pants from deadmines, they will add 4 more crit
If you get the other BoA shoulders i would change your belt to the Random dungeon bandit cloak, for 5 more crit also.
Also get the seal of argas ring to repace one of yours, its better then either depending on how you want to gear.
Get some throat piercing daggers for a thrown weapon also, daggers fire quicker to stop bandages and they have 2 agility.
sounds like a lot, but most of it you can do while waiting for the queue to pop for WSG.
Most of all have fun.
oops, I forgot, grab Rumsy black label rum if you can also, its cheap and will give 150 more hit points. Use those every time you die.
Those gear changes should have you close to 500 ap, and more then 30% crit. Also if you max your professions the haste from herbing is huge and the extra cit from mining might have you closer to 40% by the time your done.
