Your boot and cloak enchant don't stack btw. Should probably switch cloak to shadow armor (3agi/7armor) and still be at 10% speed. Or you could switch boots to minor speed to get 12% movespeed.
You can also get 4agi to gloves, but I assume thats waiting on an ilvl 23 pair of gloves of the fang.
As to the video itself...95% of it was you killing levelers with <1k hp. Its not particularly hard or impressive to kill a leveler in heirloom before cheap shot it up. Theres bits of solid gameplay in there, but its buried under killing mostly levelers. You should keep making videos, but up the level of play in the content. More twink v twink. More sap healer and open on EFC plays. Etc.
Also how do you play without the health bars showing? Its so useful to have everyone's heatlh bars above their head so you can see who is low and not have to tab target through everyone...