I'll do the first 30 seconds for you, let me see.
You run out of the gates, your first global is spent shielding - horrific mistake vs any team that can clean you when the shield is not needed at all. Granted they can open on you from stealth (kinda) but ryan can stop them both. Discs are extremely susceptible to burst with no shield and the debuff. It is however okay to shield - if you protect with trash buffs, something you don't do at all. Shielding before protecting it vs a double dispel team is probably the worst mistake any disc can ever make, shields carry.
You then get carried by ryans opener, you're completely cleaned in 2 globals as you have 4 buffs, but he lands perfect double timed cc on them both. Next few seconds you play well, killing psyfiends and doing your best to avoid being cc'd. Not easy granted, however you could have positioned yourself closer to the middle section allowing you to LoS the psyfiend casts.
You get evangelism stacks but don't even use the cd (extra healing hurts no one, even if it is overhealing, if it crits those aegis shields will be stronger than ever) and from what i can see don't even have the ability on your bars. You don't keep ryan stacked up with grace - leaving him even more so susceptible to dispels, knowing ryans noob blocking skills that's probably not the best idea. With double skillbender and 3 orb dp he'd be one shot with no shields or hots up. Even a skillbender and mind blast dp would get him extremely low, in duels if he doesnt block my synapse mind blast 3 orb dp with no shield chances are he's dead.
I'd like to add, i wasn't flaming, merely commenting how i struggle to watch disc gameplays. Oh and for future - include the damage/healing scoreboard after, always nice to see opponents MMR there too
If you want to argue vs my comments feel free, but their pretty crucial errors in my eyes which against GOOD opponents would be punished pretty badly.
Not here to cause arguments as i said, it's nice to see a not so OP comp being played - for the large part quite well, however i see that the disc still doesn't really need to do anything special for the comp to work, which saddens me still. Much prefer gameplay that annoys me to skilless, mindless stuff though
/wink no Prot Pala gameplay plox.