editing: i think less slowmo and more things that express the pro things you do, also dont be repetative and sync it with the music, try and find a better song make it more of a brutal type theme, so add in some heavy metal or something along those lines. another thing make sure the editing isnt over done and goes with the flow, we dont want to see your editing we want to see your game play. in conclusion: just make sure the editing highlights your game play goes with the flow of the game play and music synced and isnt repetative or drawn out, a half second slowmo is a lot better then a 3second or even a 1 seconds slow mo
gameplay: go for something exotic and shows off your skill, not that your a lol shatter mage, nothing wrong with being one just make your videos show skill. examples would be 2v1ing in, meh 1750+ getting some clutch polys in 3s or some clutch cs's, showing some clutch game play over all, and example would be having to blink away from a dk but he has death grip up, so u ice block his death grip. next thing is, dont show much of 2s, it doesnt take much skill to be good in 2s, show 3s gameplay 2k+ with nice comps, u can do rmp but i'de suggest u dont, its to op. try mls at lv 70 its a pretty skillfull comp.
finishing touches: make it so we can hear the coordination between you and your temmates on team speek vent or w/e, show us how good you guys can call out, once again dont over do it but add in 1-2 clips of some clutch plays with your voices in it
u got potential just work on it dont let the haters get you down ~ conflagz