As an FC, crit is completely useless if you plan on having a twink healer and a good DPS along side you. I made a Chardev for you, and I switched you to 10, got you better gear, and such for an FC. Ten's stats scaling, which is dramatically different from 11, is a lot better.
I also changed your profession to Herbalism instead of Eng for heal and haste, and I also changed your helm and trinket.
Changed your talent point too.
And, by the way, I didn't add any other looms than you had, assuming you didn't use the others in your Chardev because you didn't have them. =D Enjoy.