My first commentary (10 twink)

[Oliks]

I just finished my first commentary ever made. I'm still very new to it and obviously my native language isn't english and i have a lot to learn about commentating, but i had a lot of fun writing a (very) rough script, but it turned out okay.. Here you go:

10 Twink - Goldmode RFC - 4:40 With Commentary - YouTube

Please write in comments on youtube what you think (Or here but i pref utube)

 

[Stavie]

Try to say uhm instead of the danish øhm since it sounds better to english listeners

Otherwise nice =)