Oh, you play 24s now :0 didn't know.
Imo go with JP shoulders/mace (or crit staff, might be better), head + leg looms to cloth for some haste, and obviously hotshots but those will be a PITA to get. Other than that looks good to me, +100 mana chest in premades is better but this is a pug set I assume. Oh and skinning might be better than alchemy, idk it's like 8int, 2stam vs 2% crit, personal preference I guess.
8/10