EMUZH I | 29 Twink Rogue pvp | part 1/3 | part : arena (short)

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Eyo Guys, i made this video in 4 hours, so its not " 2012 " the move " edit..
It's my first video and edit.
This part is some arena gameplay that i made in 1-3hours. but anyways i will let you watch the video now.
...I would love some feedback, what you think about it and if you would see next part, and would like me to make more.
Music.. You might not like the music but i want to go with my own music style :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pRUoV-yD47g
 
I'll give u my honest feedback and I have to say that I don't like it too much as it looks right now. The idea of the intro is good but it's too long for doing the same thing over and over, add something more other than the walking or shorten it down maybe? Whats up with the shadowthingy on the video all the time btw? Sure for the intro but all the time? I want to see what's going on, on your full interface since I like the interface u have. Some times it even made it impossible to watch what was going on in the arenas which is a critical error in a movie. I would also change the music to something more neutral, it's a little over the top for me. Other than that I think u can make it a really good movie and I hope for the best.

Now have in mind that this is my opinion only, many might like it just as it is. :)
 
Trollguden said:
good give u my honest feedback and I have to say that I don't like it too much as it looks right now. The idea of the intro is good but it's too long for doing the same thing over and over, add something more other than the walking or shorten it down maybe? Whats up with the shadowthingy on the video all the time btw? Sure for the intro but all the time? I want to see what's going on, on your full interface since I like the interface u have. Some times it even made it impossible to watch what was going on in the arenas which is a critical error in a movie. I would also change the music to something more neutral, it's a little over the top for me. Other than that I think u can make it a really good movie and I hope for the best.

Now have in mind that this is my opinion only, many might like it just as it is. :)
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^ this but the music was good if it changed into other music. That kinda makes the video more interesting sometimes.

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It was quite boring to be honest. I didn't enjoy the music, no focus kicks/gouges/bombs were used, no clutch restealths, no jukes or outplaying your opponents (other than smashing dps abilities till death) or any amazing plays that would be worthy of a video IMO. Not really even any outstanding crits or anything :( I recommend you reserve A LOT more time harvesting your clips. Not even the best video editor in the world, along with best music you could ever possibly pick will make a video good if the actual footage is boring or subpar.

Gotta say your editing seemed pretty smooth so far (with maybe a pinch of over-editing like Trollguden said), the gameplay could have been worse aswell. With some more effort, I'm sure you can make your next videos better ;) There were also a couple restealths and kicks at least so that's a plus too.

One more thing: The intro where you walked around with cool glowy weapon enchants was so fucking cheesy lmao. I honestly don't think I've ever seen a wow rogue pvp video, where there WASN'T an intro exactly like that... And I've been watching them since tbc :D

Hope I did not upset you, but you wanted honest feedback so here it is.
 
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Mesikämmen said:
It was quite boring to be honest. I didn't enjoy the music, no focus kicks/gouges/bombs were used, no clutch restealths, no jukes or outplaying your opponents (other than smashing dps abilities till death) or any amazing plays that would be worthy of a video IMO. Not really even any outstanding crits or anything :( I recommend you reserve A LOT more time harvesting your clips. Not even the best video editor in the world, along with best music you could ever possibly pick will make a video good if the actual footage is boring or subpar.

Gotta say your editing seemed pretty smooth so far (with maybe a pinch of over-editing like Trollguden said), the gameplay could have been worse aswell. With some more effort, I'm sure you can make your next videos better ;) There were also a couple restealths and kicks at least so that's a plus too.

One more thing: The intro where you walked around with cool glowy weapon enchants was so fucking cheesy lmao. I honestly don't think I've ever seen a wow rogue pvp video, where there WASN'T an intro exactly like that... And I've been watching them since tbc :D

Hope I did not upset you, but you wanted honest feedback so here it is.
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thanks, but there was alot of kicks gouges, look at the video again, and as i said i just played a few arenas and took the clips, i would say this part was more like a test, but trust me part 2 will be insane, thanks for the feedback,i like it, this is what kind of feedback i want, i wanna make my videos better and you guys show me what i should do better :) thank you all but as i said rewatch the video there was a clip with some insane kicks back to back :D
 
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